Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I write a recount about how I saved Emily using full stops and capital letters in order.
Last Thursday down by the river I was fishing by myself. I heard a loud scream and I saw a little girl in the river. she was shouting for help because she was drowning.I dashed into the cold water and I pulled her out from the cold water I had my clothes on and I was shivering when I came out.
After I saved Emily her mum said ''thank you very much"and I said "youre welcome". Then Emily went home and her mother sent her to bed. Emily never went to the river again.
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